Talk:Fireforce

Ideas for improvement
Interesting article. I have the following ideas for improvement:
 * Referencing: in line citations should be added to each paragraph;
 * Images: are there any images that could be added?
 * Prose: I had a quick look through the article and found some typos, but I might have missed some. Also some of the wording might not be as tight as it could be. As such, a request to have the article copy edited by the Guild of Copy Editors might help improve the article in this regard;
 * more wikilinks could be added where appropriate (on first mention);
 * other ideas/suggestions might be forthcoming if the article was to be peer reviewed. Cheers. AustralianRupert (talk) 07:00, 11 September 2010 (UTC)


 * Thanks for the ideas. I will try my best to improve this article. --MFIreland (talk) 16:26, 11 September 2010 (UTC)