Talk:Flawless Sabrina

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Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 21:18, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

Peer Review
This article has a lot of information about its subject, so it is excellent in that sense. It also does a great job of balancing her film career and her life, particularly her public life since not a lot is known about her private life. A few notes are to not include her age in the article, since that changes every year. Also, put some of the information that is in the opening paragraphs in a new section, called something like 'Biography' or 'Life'. Also, there is a notice from Wikipedia about needing more sources to meet their notability guidelines. Also, it goes into more Sabrina's life in the 'Career' section; this should be moved. If at all possible, also briefly describe why LGBT communities were sometimes uncomfortable with her, and more details about her arrests. Other than that and a few grammatical errors (which I will try to fix all), it is a good article. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Grapple12 (talk • contribs) 18:51, 5 November 2016 (UTC)

Peer Review
I think your article has lots of strong information and detailed background with a great organization about Flawless Sabrina's whole life. And all the resources are reliable and interesting for read.But the introductory paragraph of your project is quite long. I suggest that you break up the introductory paragraph as some separate sections to discuss ，such as biography， early life or education.In addition，it is better to add an Infobox with his picture. In general，it is very well done. — Preceding unsigned comment added by JIAJIAHAOHAO (talk • contribs) 00:11, 10 November 2016 (UTC)

Pronoun he/she for drag queen
I noticed this specific article is not consistent with the pronoun being used and seems like it should be uniform throughout the article. When I look up articles relating to Flawless Sabrina/Jack Doroshow they appear to be using the pronoun he more often. In this Out Magazine article it addresses the gender pronoun directly: http://www.out.com/entertainment/2015/01/13/why-drag-icon-mother-flawless-sabrina-hero Jooojay (talk) 16:49, 3 May 2017 (UTC)
 * I realized that this article is written specifically about the character Flawless Sabrina, and not Jack Doroshow and so I will not change the pronoun to "he" without considering the title of the article. However since this is a living person it sort of confuses the issues. We may want to revisit this. Jooojay (talk) 17:15, 3 May 2017 (UTC)