Talk:Forced abortion of Feng Jianmei

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I will be making some edits to reduce redundancy and overall length in the coming days. I will focus entirely on tightening it up rather than editing for content. I do not intend to make any changes to the information presented in this first effort. Just giving a heads up to anyone watching the article. — Zujine |talk 05:23, 11 October 2012 (UTC)


 * Good. But since you know something about this overall topic area (women's rights, one child policy, etc), you shouldn't hesitate to edit for content too.Homunculus (duihua) 21:46, 14 October 2012 (UTC)

Title
I feel like the title is off, a title like Forced abortion of Feng Jianmei makes it seem like "Feng Jianmei" was aborted instead of the abortion being performed on her. In general titles like Death of X, Suicide of X, Murder of X or Killing of X mean that X was the subject which was "removed" (for a lack of a better word). I feel like it should be moved to somehting like Forced abortion performed on Feng Jianmei instead.★Trekker (talk) 17:35, 19 May 2017 (UTC)
 * Feng Jianmei forced abortion case would be more concise and still accurate, as used for example here: Pieceofmetalwork (talk) 12:32, 16 August 2021 (UTC)

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