Talk:François-Xavier Donzelot

Suggestions for a very nice article
Hi Tasos,

It has been a while since I have logged on to Wikipedia - I did this morning and ended up looking at this latest article you have been working on. It is wonderful! I see that you are still editing and I have a few suggestions... I hope they are useful! :)


 * Perhaps do not capitalize "Library" in the section titled "British blockade of Corfu"
 * A few more wiki links might be good :-) e.g. Louis XVIII of France when he is mentioned, Battle of Waterloo when it is mentioned in the "Waterloo" section, Martinique in the "Martinique" section
 * Again in the first sentence of the "Martinique" section, you write "[He was] Governor of Martinique from 1818&endash;1826" ... I think it might be better written out as "... from 1818 to 1826."
 * Regarding the military colonisation programme, you write that "[he implemented] a military colonisation programme" but then later in the paragraph that "[the plan] was never implemented." I understand the meaning, but it is a little confusing and might warrant clarification :)
 * In the paragraph regarding naval support for Spain, who or where is "Canning"? Right now the wikilink is to an article about preserved food.
 * Any chance of adding dates to the Martinique events?
 * At the end I was left wondering... to where did he retire? Is a date of death known or just a year?

As I said, this article is wonderful!! and it is a very nice read. Thanks for writing it! I hope my suggestions are useful :)

Sincerely, --Iamunknown 11:00, 3 October 2011 (UTC)
 * Hi Iamunknown. It is very nice seeing you after such a long time. :). Thank you very much for your excellent suggestions. I will implement as many as I can for the moment and the rest, especially the details you mentioned, I will check later. Take care. Dr.K. λogosπraxis  11:17, 3 October 2011 (UTC)

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