Talk:Francis X. DiLorenzo

Untitled
Phrases like "headlines shocked Hawaii residents" do not reflect well on the article which is far too detailed as well. Rmhermen 19:21, 28 January 2006 (UTC)

There is no citation for DiLorenzo's comments on the Sexual Minorities Commission. Mike 1981

Criticism section
The article is too vague in the criticism section. All it says is that two priests disagreed with the Bishop, but it doesn't give much in examples. Why did Father Mamo disagree with Bishop DiLorenzo? What exactly did Bishop DiLorenzo do or not do? J.J. Bustamante 04:41, 6 March 2007 (UTC)

Resignation of three women Pastoral Coordinators
Why was this section incorporated? It has nothing to do with the subject of the article. Did they resign because of something the bishop said or did? If nothing more specific is added in a few days, I'll remove the section. Blockhouse (talk) 17:22, 11 December 2007 (UTC)

Vague
This article is vague, and lacking in inline citations. --DThomsen8 (talk) 12:23, 1 August 2010 (UTC)

Neutrality
Several sections of this article potentially violate Wikipedia's policy on neutrality. Most in need of review are sections: Bishop of Honolulu-Opposition to Homosexuality, and Bishop of Richmond-Controversies-Father Thomas J. Quinlan. --dnclark 17:02, 19 November 2015 (UTC)

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