Talk:Gene Cernan/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Llammakey (talk · contribs) 09:55, 26 May 2017 (UTC)

Comments
 * Apollo 17 should be linked at first mention in lead
 * ✅  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * In the "Early years" section, remove the definite article before USS Roanoake per WP:SHIPS
 * ✅  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * I would add a link to US Navy in that section.
 * ✅  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * Link aircraft carriers
 * ✅  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * In the "Apollo program" section, would move LM link to first mention
 * ✅  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * overlink of Purdue University and Neil Armstrong
 * ✅  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * Moon doesn't really need to be linked, and if you wanted to do it, at first mention
 * ✅  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * Needs a cite on the second marriage
 * ✅  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * Would also tidy up the references section - a lot of variation in the cites' date format, and general citation format
 * Date format commonized. Working on the others.
 * Okay I think I got it all.  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * No DAB links, though I've got one dead link and a couple of redirects in the references - the references really need overhauling.
 * Technically this is not a GA criteria, but I can work on it since I am eventually taking this to FA.  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * Not seeing any dead links, just a couple false positives from the bot.  Kees08  (Talk)  
 * As for prose - I get a copyvio warning using the tools, though that may be due to the large quote. Will need more experienced editors to help on this one Llammakey (talk) 09:55, 26 May 2017 (UTC)
 * Ok, I've sought guidance and since the copyvio warning is mainly based on the quote, I'm going to give the article a pass on that. Llammakey (talk) 12:04, 27 May 2017 (UTC)

Let me know if there is anything else you want me to address. Thanks!  Kees08  (Talk)   22:01, 27 May 2017 (UTC)
 * Nope. That's a pass. Congrats. Llammakey (talk) 00:49, 28 May 2017 (UTC)