Talk:Gray platelet syndrome

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This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Pchien3.

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Hello! My name is Katherine and I'm editing this page as a part of a course project. The following is what I plan to do with the article... any suggestions? -In the first paragraph, I’m going to add how the condition affects the population (lifespan, treatment or medical care required), and paint the big picture of normal platelet function so readings without extensive scientific background can understand. -Get rid of the quotations in paragraph 3, and reorganize the points in this paragraph into other paragraphs. -Add a symptoms heading -(Mechanisms): Add paragraph on how the alpha granule reduction contribute to the symptoms of the condition, and add a picture of the grey platelet. -Change the (current) second paragraph to its own heading (diagnosis), and what kind of mutations on the gene caused the syndrome and how it’s diagnosed. Pchien3 (talk) 03:33, 12 October 2015 (UTC)