Talk:Green Cadres

Comments on copyedit

 * " joining, what was described by the authorities as, the Bolsheviks" -> removed as it needs clarification to stay in the article, for example is the authorities' description correct? (t &#183; c)  buidhe  07:06, 9 January 2022 (UTC)
 * Since no Bolsheviks (within the meaning of members of the Russian Social Democratic Labour Party/Communist Party othe Soviet Union) were there (at least in any significant number, the claim was more likely have been used as a synonym for a "revolutionary" or something in that respect. Considering the ongoing war in Russia at the time, it seems likely "Bolsheviks" would be a term readily known to readers of contemporary newspaers. I'll reprhrase this shortly. (T)
 * the "pogrom spirit of 1848" was present any opinion-based quotes must be attributed per MOS:QUOTE
 * Quite correct. I'll go back to the source and find attribution information first. (T)
 * On 18 October, a special court-martial was established in Croatia-Slavonia for the Green Cadres – without much success Needs more explanation of "without much success". What was this court martial trying to achieve and how did it fall short of its goals? (t &#183; c)  buidhe  07:51, 9 January 2022 (UTC)
 * It was meant to curb and suppress desertions/mutinies, but little (if anything) was achieved in terms of achieving that goal. I'll add the information needed to clarfy. (T)

Thanks for the copyedit. I appreciate your input very much.--Tomobe03 (talk) 11:22, 16 January 2022 (UTC)