Talk:Gustav Nachtigal

This article is clearly incomplete, lacking details of Nachtigal's accounts and experienes. His destinations make up the majority of the article's information, but the fact that so few dates are given prevents the reader from synthezing this information into anything meaninful. It's difficult to claim that Nachtigal was one of Germany's great explorers without telling us what he saw or why any of what he did mattered. It's not enough to call him important because he went to a series of places, we need to know what he did in those places. That's the most important part of travelling after all. Additionally, the writing style of the article is a little annoying to read, as it is mostly comprised of short rapid fire sentences. Sderry97 (talk) 18:48, 23 September 2018 (UTC)