Talk:Hans Joachim von Zieten

Review
B class. More proofreading is needed before submitting for GA, but I don't have the time right now. For example, please look at the following sentence from the Aging years section. The first clause is confusing (Zieten was not literally the sole general of the era), the comma has a space before it and there is no period (.) when the sentence ends. There are other places like this.
 * "Probably the sole generals of the epoch, he enjoyed the special trust of Frederick, who frequently visited "his old father Zieten" In one visit with the king..."
 * yes, I agree, did this. auntieruth (talk) 16:41, 31 January 2017 (UTC)