Talk:Hans Thewissen

Hans Thewissen Bio
I Just completed this bio. I hope you like it. I know the professor and have read several of his books. --Akrasia25 (talk) 00:34, 16 December 2018 (UTC)
 * You should probably take out the seemingly random statements about whale evolution, since it doesn’t seem all that relevant to talk about how Ambulocetus hunted in an article about the guy who discovered it  User:Dunkleosteus77 &#124;push to talk 06:51, 21 December 2018 (UTC)
 * The majority of this article is a rehash of evolution of cetaceans. You need to focus on Thewissen. For example, the first paragraph of the Sensory organ evolution section is good, the other paragraphs are very off-topic and need to be deleted  User:Dunkleosteus77 &#124;push to talk 21:12, 12 January 2019 (UTC)

Ok, I agree. Could you help me by deleting what you think is off-topic? Thank you for the nice comments on the sensory-organ development. I am trying to get this to GA status. Think you could help with that too? --Akrasia25 (talk) 21:27, 12 January 2019 (UTC)
 * I tried by there are some sections that don't talk about Thewissen at all, and the entire thing seems unnecessarily wordy (like you're trying to add page-filler), it has a bunch of lengthy quotes just lying around, it seems to be missing a lot of articles (such as "Thewissen and S. Taseer Hussain Howard University"), there are far too many pictures, and a lot of duplinks. Also, put something else in the Discovery of Kutchicetus, and italicize scientific names  User:Dunkleosteus77 &#124;push to talk 23:05, 12 January 2019 (UTC)