Talk:History of Sunderland A.F.C./GA1

GA Review

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1. Is it reasonably well written?

   A. Prose quality:

   B. MoS compliance:

2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?

   A. References to sources:

   B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:

   C. No original research:

3. Is it broad in its coverage?

   A. Major aspects:

   B. Focused:

4. Is it neutral?

   Fair representation without bias:

5. Is it stable?

   No edit wars, etc:

6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?

   A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:

   B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:

7. Overall:

   Pass or Fail:

I like the article. Have some small qualms:

1. It would look a little nicer if you could add an image to the lead.
2. 1959-1970 - "have equaled Sunderland's achievement of lifting the FA Cup while playing outside the top tier of English football." – Source needed. Done - Source added.
3. "In January 1949 Sunderland were involved in what is often regarded as the first case of a player" - comma after January 1949. Done - Comma added.
4. Maybe an infobox would be sufficient for the top.

I am going to pass this anyway. I do suggest that they are completed.Mitch32^{(Go Syracuse)} 00:03, 18 January 2009 (UTC)