Talk:History of Sunderland A.F.C./GA1

GA Review
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 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality:
 * B. MoS compliance:
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources:
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
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 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
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 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
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 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
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I like the article. Have some small qualms:


 * 1) It would look a little nicer if you could add an image to the lead.
 * 2) 1959-1970 - "have equaled Sunderland's achievement of lifting the FA Cup while playing outside the top tier of English football." – Source needed. Done - Source added.
 * 3) "In January 1949 Sunderland were involved in what is often regarded as the first case of a player" - comma after January 1949. Done - Comma added.
 * 4) Maybe an infobox would be sufficient for the top.

I am going to pass this anyway. I do suggest that they are completed. Mitch 32 ( Go Syracuse ) 00:03, 18 January 2009 (UTC)