Talk:In My Defence

Freddie DIDN'T write it. It's from Time and Freddie didn't write any of Time. Martin Packer (talk) 21:20, 21 December 2009 (UTC)

This article is very badly written, is full of incorrect grammar and needs to be rewritten in a way that makes it comprehensible. Markmel (talk) 12:07, 28 September 2010 (UTC)

"stronger in low and battery"
I was about to ask if this should be In My Defence or In My Defense, but reading through the article I am left confused. By all of it. The text seems to have been machine translated from a foreign language into English, and although I can discern a bit of meaning, much is unclear. E.g. "Producers expected if Mercury was not satisfied with the last song, which left him burn with the rest of the Queen, but the mercury found satisfactory final version" makes a certain amount of sense, but "left him burn with the rest of the Queen"? The article starts off by talking about a performance at a musical with Cliff Richard, but which musical? It was performed "to the beat", but what does this mean, and why is it notable? The instrumentation is a little off? I could rewrite it myself, but (a) I would have to slash it down to a couple of sentences, which would be controversial and (b) I can barely understand it. -Ashley Pomeroy (talk) 13:09, 29 September 2010 (UTC)