Talk:Into the Unknown: Making Frozen II/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 03:45, 18 July 2021 (UTC)


 * Why is the "starring" part of the infobox purposely written to be empty?
 * Improve the main image's non-free use rationale.
 * "included" "includes" (MOS:TENSE)
 * "shortly after the platform's launch" – specify per WP:LEAD
 * "Local crew" "The local crew"
 * "filming crew were" "filming crew was" (American English)
 * "dialogue and singing was" "dialogue and singing were"
 * Add a serial comma after "storyboards".
 * "The cast come" "The cast comes"
 * Add a serial comma after "Josh Gad as Olaf".
 * "lengthy hours" "long hours"
 * Add a serial comma between "Bobby, Kristen and Jennifer".
 * "The crew discuss" "The crew discusses"
 * Add a serial comma between "Norway, Finland and Iceland".
 * "Animation supervisor on Anna Hyun Min Lee" - reword
 * ✅. Pamzeis (talk) 02:24, 19 July 2021 (UTC)


 * Add a hyphen between "half finished".
 * ✅. Pamzeis (talk) 02:24, 19 July 2021 (UTC)


 * "which approaches" "that approaches"
 * "decorated by" "decorated with"
 * "the crew arrive" "the crew arrives"
 * Add a serial comma between "Buck, Unten and Walters".
 * "afterwards" "afterward" (American English)
 * Sources are archived.
 * Sort categories in alphabetical order.
 * Ping when done. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 16:44, 18 July 2021 (UTC)
 * , ✅ Wingwatchers (talk) 18:59, 18 July 2021 (UTC)