Talk:Iron Patriot

Poor writing in Fictional History section
"During the Dark Reign storyline, the original Iron Patriot armor was donned by Norman Osborn as an amalgam between Captain America and Iron Man.[1] As Iron Patriot, Osborn exerts his authority as the 'commander' of H.A.M.M.E.R. and his own Avengers. But was increasingly jeopardized by various superheroes like when Iron Patriot was tricked into attacking Tony Stark in an early Iron Man armor while suffering from damage at the time to show his brutally assaulting a man physically and mentally incapable of even attempting to strike back,[2] and when the New Avengers used Iron Patriot's tracking device on Luke Cage as a trick to blow up his own house.[3]"

Can someone please rewrite this section? It's terrible. I'm unfamiliar with Iron Man/Iron Patriot history, leaving me unable to deduce what the original author had intended to say. Pritchard 19:54, 28 June 2013 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by TheAdventMaster (talk • contribs)