Talk:James L. Hurley

Promotional Tone
I've just removed reams of content that has a highly promotional tone, including sentences that are chiefly buzzwords, most of which is sourced to the website Hurley controls. (The website of the institution for which he currently serves as President.) There may be some good stuff there, but 1) much of it was about what the institution did while Hurley was president, which doesn't belong in his bio, and 2) it can't be sourced to an entity that has a clear interest in promoting his accomplishments.

If anyone would like to add some of it back in, I'd suggest we discuss phrasing and sourcing first. EducatedRedneck (talk) 01:08, 21 April 2024 (UTC)