Talk:Janet McCloud

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 * Added archive https://web.archive.org/20081205045647/http://indigenouswomen.org:80/Articles/The-Great-Janet-McCloud.html to http://indigenouswomen.org/Articles/The-Great-Janet-McCloud.html

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Wiki Education assignment: HIST 121 - U.S. History since 1877
— Assignment last updated by Public-historian-90 (talk) 13:37, 2 April 2024 (UTC)

Fishing Rights Activism, Sapa Dawn Center, Yet-Si-Blue
Fishing Rights Activism: I reworked the paragraphs here to be more cohesive and have a better flow. I also edited a few grammatical mistakes and removed quotes that did not have a source or better the information of the article.

Sapa Dawn Center: I reworked the paragraphs to be more cohesive and to flow better. I also edited grammatical errors. I added some background to what the Wounded Knee Occupation was and how it connected to the Sapa Dawn Center.

Yet-Si-Blue: I reworked the paragraphs here to be more cohesive and have a better flow. I also edit grammatical errors. I added in some background information on Native American naming traditions to better explain the significance of her name. Weyesandromeda (talk) 15:24, 29 April 2024 (UTC)

Introduction, Ancestry and Early Life, Resurrecting Native American Spirituality, Death
Introduction: Changed the wording to better introduce the article and improve the flow.

Ancestry and Early Life: Re-worded a few sentence for a better flow. Moved certain sentences around within the section for a more cohesive section as a whole. A few grammatical error were also fixed.

Resurrecting Native American Spirituality: In this section I re-worded, fixed some grammar errors, and condensed the first paragraph too have the section flow better. The second paragraph I added to give more context about her involvement with the women’s rights movement and social justice issues.

Death: In this section I changed some of the language in order for it to sound like the rest of the article. Grammatical errors were also fixed in this section. Stolp.micah (talk) 15:39, 29 April 2024 (UTC)