Talk:John L. Stevens

B-Class
I have rated this article B-Class:


 * ✅ The article is suitably referenced, with inline citations where necessary.
 * Excellently referenced!


 * ✅ The article reasonably covers the topic, and does not contain obvious omissions or inaccuracies.


 * ✅ The article has a defined structure.
 * Logically organized and straight forward structure.


 * ✅ Content should be organized into groups of related material, including a lead section and all the sections that can reasonably be included in an article of its kind.
 * ✅ The article is reasonably well-written.
 * ✅ The prose contains no major grammatical errors and flows sensibly, but it certainly need not be "brilliant". The Manual of Style need not be followed rigorously.
 * My only complaint is that the lead paragraph feels a little awkward... but that is easy to fix.


 * ✅ The article contains supporting materials where appropriate
 * There are three photographs that support the text.


 * ✅ The article presents its content in an appropriately accessible way
 * &mdash;Noah 20:09, 30 December 2008 (UTC)

Still has problems
For example: "Committee of Safety, led by Lorrin A. Thurston and Sanford B. Dole" conflicts with sources that say the committee was led by Henry E. Cooper. Probably confusing events of 1887 and the annexation with the overthow itself. It needs either much work or should be downgraded to level C in my opinion. W Nowicki (talk) 23:36, 19 August 2010 (UTC)
 * This piece was edited quite a bit by another editor since I last looked in on it. I'll try to check some of what was added (and subtracted) when I return from a break. MarmadukePercy (talk) 23:43, 19 August 2010 (UTC)