Talk:Josh Tetrick

Neutrality issue
Hi, I saw there was an issue with the section. I'm happy to help with the tone of this section if I get a chance this weekend. Any other editors want to weigh in? ReginaldTQ (talk) 21:50, 27 January 2015 (UTC)


 * Well, I'd say this kind of language isn't encyclopedic: "Tetrick has driven Hampton Creek to achieve many business milestones in a remarkably short amount of time". It has more the flavor of editorializing.  "Has driven" is a non-standard, marketing-style phrase, and "remarkably short" seems pretty POV.  It should be fine after toning down the marketing language (which never convinces readers to take a company seriously anyway, when done overtly).  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 50.139.122.155 (talk) 03:23, 28 January 2015 (UTC)

Agreed and I hope I helped. Seemed salesy to me too. DLCasper (talk) 23:06, 5 February 2015 (UTC)

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