Talk:K2-155d

Copy edit
Hi. Nice looking article.
 * I have pushed the copy vio down. Earwig is below 5%. (If you don't understand that don't worry; it is good.)
 * You write "The brightness of its host star makes K2-155d a good target for future studies using instruments such as the James Webb Space Telescope" From a copy edit PoV I would like to know how that relates to the preceding sentence. Ie, could the JWST be used to confirm if K2-155d "may be capable of harboring liquid water"? Also, you end the previous paragraph with "The mass of K2-155d and the brightness of its host star may be measured by future observations from the W. M. Keck Observatory and the James Webb Space Telescope". Is that unconnected to "The brightness of its host star makes K2-155d a good target for future studies using instruments such as the James Webb Space Telescope"?
 * "Its radius lies halfway the similarities of small rocky planets and bigger gas-rich planets" reasonably accurately reflects the source, so I am loath to copy edit it away, in spite of it being factually wrong. That radius is a little on the small side for a rocky Earth-like exoplanet. You may wish to revise that sentence with a different source.
 * "Studies have shown that the it would maintain a moderate surface temperature if its insolation is smaller than ∼1.5 times that of Earth." I nearly added what the probability of that is, but that may be pushing a copy editor's role. However, I think that it would be interesting for readers if you were to. (I don't think that doing math from sourced figures counts as OR.)


 * I think that I am done. I will have another look in the morning with fresh eyes. Let me know your thoughts on the second point above. Ping me if you want to know why I have made a particular change. Revert anything you disagree with. Good luck with the GAN. Gog the Mild (talk) 23:10, 6 May 2018 (UTC)

Planet d
Planet d is not in habitable zone, look this (NASA report that study). The star is a K-dawrf, not a M-dwarf.--Kirk39 (talk) 21:04, 18 June 2018 (UTC)