Talk:Kalyan Bulchand Advani

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This regards to template message dated May 19, 2020.

1.This article needs additional citations for verification. Originally 10 references were provided including Encyclopedia Sindhiana, Encyclopedia of Indian Literature, Sindhi Adabi Board and Indian literature magazine. References from trustworthy websites like Sahitya Academy, Sindhisanget.com and WorldCat were also provided. Now I have added four more references. Do you still need more references? Please specify the places where you need references, if possible for you.

2. This article may require copy editing for grammar, style, cohesion, tone, or spelling I have checked spellings but could not find any... please identify any spelling mistakes. My first language is not English so there may be minor grammatical mistakes. In which paragraph do you think there is a serious issue of grammer?

I also found that an article with the same title was deleted on July 25, 2017. That arcticle was not created by me and I do not know about its contents. So I am not responsible for that article.

I shall appreciate feeback and repy for further improvement.

Mukhtiaraliunar (talk) 10:23, 19 May 2020 (UTC)Mukhtiaraliunar May 19, 2020.