Talk:Katie Joplin/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 22:01, 9 August 2018 (UTC)

• I'll take this one. Courcelles (talk) 22:01, 9 August 2018 (UTC)

• Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 22:07, 9 August 2018 (UTC)

• Shouldn't the be capitalized in "the WB Television Network"?

• Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 22:39, 9 August 2018 (UTC)

• "Broadcast on Monday nights at 9:30 pm EST,[3] each episode lasts 30 minutes." including commercials?

• Added. Aoba47 (talk) 22:39, 9 August 2018 (UTC)

• "referenced show as scheduled for a "short run"" missing a word here

• Added. Aoba47 (talk) 22:39, 9 August 2018 (UTC)

• "the subsequent of a promotional campaign." something needs doing here.

• Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 22:39, 9 August 2018 (UTC)

• 5 times 30 is 150, so if only five episodes ever aired, where is "Overall, Katie Joplin was broadcast for a total of 210 minutes." coming from?
• I think that the article was taking into account the two unaired episodes, which does not make sense. I have removed it. Aoba47 (talk) 22:39, 9 August 2018 (UTC)

• Any chance for more in the critical reception section?

• The series was largely ignored during critical reviews; it took me a while to even find the three reviews referenced in the article. I believe that I have found all of the online sources that discuss the show, and most of the print ones (there may be others out there, but I have not found anything else). Unfortunately, this will probably prevent me from putting this up for FAC in the future. Aoba47 (talk) 22:39, 9 August 2018 (UTC)

• Otherwise this looks good. Courcelles (talk) 22:20, 9 August 2018 (UTC)

• Thank you for the review! Aoba47 (talk) 22:39, 9 August 2018 (UTC)

• Promoted. Courcelles (talk) 22:57, 9 August 2018 (UTC)