Talk:Kenya Moore/Archive 1

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Recent edits concerning birthplace - Detroit or Houston
All the reliable sources I have consulted state that Moore was born in Detroit. Shearonink (talk) 01:39, 5 January 2016 (UTC)

Lede
The lede didn't exist until I wrote up this version. In the course of many edits by another editor the lede then looked like this. I adjusted the lede to more closely conform to the WP:LEDE guidelines and to WP:MOS especially regarding encyclopedic tone and avoiding WP:PEACOCK & WP:PUFFERY. The lede has now been changed back to the this version. In my opinion the lede is now not a summary of the article but verges into POV territory and reads more like a PR piece than the lead section of an encyclopedia article. That being said, let's discuss the changes here. Thanks, Shearonink (talk) 23:57, 14 April 2016 (UTC)
 * I made some further changes - please discuss likes/dislikes about the present lede here. Shearonink (talk) 23:27, 15 April 2016 (UTC)
 * Discuss? Shearonink (talk) 15:55, 16 April 2016 (UTC)

If you have any issues with changes to the lede please discuss here. Thanks, Shearonink (talk) 21:31, 17 April 2016 (UTC)