Talk:Khan Ataur Rahman

Khan Ata's personal life
Thanks for the topic. However, the 'personal life' part looks a bit scrappy in the way they are written. Also the info is not complete. Khan Ata has two more children from his second marriage. Mithun apa (a doctor) and Amin Vai are elder siblings of Sraboni apa (Rumana Khan, Architect). Please check and edit if possible. I can give more info if you need. Thanks. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Roopak23 (talk • contribs) 01:26, 14 May 2010 (UTC)


 * That's so nice of you. Feel free to add info and complete the article with reliable sources. &mdash; Tanvir 09:04, 14 May 2010 (UTC)

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Early life and education
On the last sentence of the second in this section, it says "he had only taka 60 seconds in his position that time". Would taka be the word to be used there or should it be something else, what do you guys think?

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