Talk:Kristiene Clarke

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This article is really well researched, particularly the paragraphs about Kristiene Clarke's academic and television career. In addition to this your filmography section is extremely thorough and the way you have structured your table makes it really easy for audiences to see Clarke's depth of work. In addition, you have gone into a lot of detail about her specific role in each film she has worked on which is really useful and helps readers to see that she has taken on numerous roles even when working on one film.

I feel that this article could be improved by including what awards Kristiene Clarke has won rather than just stating that she has been awarded some. I think that if awards and recognition is going to feature as a whole section on your wikipedia page then it needs to be more specific and include more detail. In addition to this, read over your work and be careful of what tense you are using when writing, as I noticed on a few occasions that you tend to switch between past and present tense in the same sentence.

Moreover, be careful when using the word 'transgender' as you often write it as 'transgendered' when it isn't necessary. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Lolacorb (talk • contribs) 19:53, 15 November 2016 (UTC)

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