Talk:Kupiansk civilian convoy shelling

Copy edit/rewrite required, style, tone, NPOV
Pretty self-explanatory. RadioactiveBoulevardier (talk) 06:05, 12 December 2022 (UTC)


 * @RadioactiveBoulevardier Rewrite done. Is this neutral enough? 123Writer talk 13:53, 24 July 2023 (UTC)
 * As far as neutrality, it looks more or less fine, although more English-language sources would be nice.
 * However, IMHO it needs more general CE for readability. RadioactiveBoulevardier (talk) 22:11, 24 July 2023 (UTC)