Talk:Laptop/GA1

GA Review
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This article does not meet the good article criteria and has too many issues; therefore, it has failed its nomination. Issues include but are not limited to:


 * "These products can be purchased through http://www.dallasmobilec.com" – an advertisement in the article?
 * References go after punctuation marks, not before
 * "Subnotebook" needs more references
 * "Docking stations" needs references
 * Second half of "Standards" needs references
 * "Upgradeability" references
 * "Other portable computing devices" references

Once these issues have been resolved, please feel free to renominate the article. Thanks! Gary King ( talk ) 15:57, 3 December 2008 (UTC)