Talk:Laureus World Sports Awards/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 21:03, 16 November 2017 (UTC)

Saw my name get mentioned as somebody to review this article and shall take it on. Comments will appear shortly. MWright96 (talk) 21:03, 16 November 2017 (UTC)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

History

 * "South African businessman Johann Rupert, chairman of Richemont, proposd that an organisation be created "based on the principle that sport can bridge the gaps in society and change the way people look at the world." - proposed
 * "name being derived from the Greek word for laurel," - make a slight adjustment to this text so it reads as its name being derived from the Greek word for laurel,
 * You may want to consider explaining who Jeff Bridges, Dylan McDermott and Earle Connor are. Also do the same with Lance Armstrong and Marion Jones as you have done in the lead.

Discretionary awards

 * "awarded the first and only Sporting Inspiration Award" - add was at the start of this section of text.