Talk:Lehman Brothers/Archives/2013

request(s) for edit(s)
1. non agreement between footnote #1 and the text. footnote is Lehman announce it WILL file/text in intro has it a fait accompli. suggest different footnote.

2. believe footnote ordering remains in needs of hard look for cleanup.

3. bankruptcy section; paragraph 2, sentence 1. delink "chapter 11"...already linked in intro.

4. bankruptcy section; paragraph 1, sentence 6. i continue to question date that nytimes reported "to file." lehman released press announcement early hours 9/15. how could nytimes be reporting on 9/14. believe dateline of times article to be 9/15. check source of footnote.

5. bankruptcy section; final paragraph. switch "UK" to "U.K." or "United Kingdom" and if, not linked earlier in article (don't think so), please link here.

6. bankruptcy section; paragraph 2. "were shown leaving the Lehman Brothers building in Times Square, New York." a. lehman's offices are a bit up from "times square"...being even above "duffy square." perhaps ", in the Times Square area in New York City," (with "Times Square" linked). clearly can't read "Times Square, New York."

thanks.--68.173.2.68 (talk) 18:23, 15 September 2008 (UTC)

Edit needs to be done for "Chris Pettit", Dick Fuld's right hand man. The link goes to the ballplayer graduating in 2002. Jerry steriano (talk) 14:34, 14 June 2013 (UTC)