Talk:Lena Dunham/Archives/2016/August

Semi-protected edit request on 11 August 2016
Other passages in the book recounting interactions of a sexual nature, starting when she was seven years old, with her then one-year-old sister Grace also attracted significant controversy, and prompted numerous think pieces about children's sexuality and personal boundaries.

There need to be a section in her page that actually outlines her controversy sexually assaulting her 1 year old sister. This is only ONE line in her Wiki, yet she is making videos on youtube trying to denounce sexual assault. These sources are very clear: "Dunham writes that “curiosity got the best” of her and she opened her sister’s vagina" "She describes masturbating while in bed next to her younger sister Grace" ”

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Zionvinman (talk) 16:27, 11 August 2016 (UTC)
 * I've redacted some of your comments (in compliance with WP:BLP) which in between the quotes ventured into labelling, speculation, and original research. They did not constitute a suggestion for improving the article. However your points have all been made before in better ways, littered throughout this page and its archives. I wish to mainly point out that this is a biography covering the whole of her life and career. There is a separate article for the book where this matter is discussed more fully. If you have a specific suggestion for improving the text of this article, or that one, please make it, but I advise you to keep it encyclopaedic and not add your own opinions. -- zzuuzz (talk) 18:19, 11 August 2016 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit request on 25 August 2016
"In the book, Dunham writes about being sexually assaulted by an Oberlin College classmate, which resulted in controversy over the accuracy of her account[52][53] and a case of mistaken identity when a former Oberlin College student named Barry (the pseudonym used for Dunham's alleged attacker in her book) lawyered up to ensure people don’t associate him with the content."

Besides being a terrible run-on sentence, the above passage contains the phrase: "Lawyered up". This is an inaccurate colloquialism that has no place in an article based on fact.

108.162.140.207 (talk) 19:39, 25 August 2016 (UTC)
 * Red question icon with gradient background.svg Not done: it's not clear what changes you want to be made. Please mention the specific changes in a "change X to Y" format. KGirlTrucker81talk what I'm been doing 23:43, 25 August 2016 (UTC)