Talk:Levi Canning

Excessively long lede
Pinging @Therealscorp1an and @Theleekycauldron: I rewrote the lede earlier to trim the gratuitous details about the actor's first day on set; would very much suggest even if you disagree with my content removal, to find a way to make the lede a lot shorter than it is right now. lizthegrey (talk) 22:03, 9 November 2023 (UTC)


 * I wasn't tagged but I decided to trim the lead anyway – hopefully that is okay now – I mainly trimmed some very specific details and condensed some things. To be completely fair, the bit about the first day on set was only half a sentence so I kept that in. DaniloDaysOfOurLives (talk) 22:20, 9 November 2023 (UTC)
 * I feel like it still doesn't explain why the character is notable to have a page. That last sentence of the lede is the most important one that should maybe be brought forward - it's a character, from a soap, that received a mixed reaction for the writing of the character, but a positive reaction for the casting and improvement to diversity. Then circle back around to explain that the character was introduced to fill a gap in the cast, how the role was cast, and some of the character's personality traits. lizthegrey (talk) 23:33, 9 November 2023 (UTC)