Talk:Lillie Mae

More Edits Needed to Improve Professionalism
No offense to previous contributors, but this page needs help. (Unnecessary opinions ("the Great Dave Cobb"), random periods and capitalization, etc.) I've made several changes, but more work is needed and I'm not sure what was meant by some of it. For example, in "Early career," "Laylas" and the song title "I Don't Love You Like That" are just hanging there. It's not clear at all what was intended. Also: "And for Jim’s next album following time flies." Does this mean she played on "Jim Lauderdale and Roland White," per his discography? The last paragraph/sentence is a mess; is it relevant? There are no citations. And it needs commas. Fustigate314159 (talk) 01:15, 3 October 2019 (UTC)