Talk:Lisa Hoffman

grammar issue
English is not my mother tongue. Anyway, I think the verb in "Together, the couple have four children" should be "has" and not "have". Can somebody confirm and eventually correct this maybe-error? Thanks for your attention, Herb.

"Career" section reads like an ad for Lisa Hoffman Beauty.
Please consider revising. Thank you. navkat (talk) 08:25, 8 July 2013 (UTC)

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