Talk:List of kingdoms in Africa throughout history/GA1

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Nominator: 13:40, 9 May 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Phlsph7 (talk · contribs) 08:23, 11 May 2024 (UTC)

Hello and thanks for all your improvements to this list. However, despite the improvements, the list fails criterion 2b since there are too many unreferenced paragraphs. Examples are the paragraphs starting with "Ancient history refers to the time period", "Outside of North Africa, most of African political history", and "Sub-Saharan African societies have broadly been labelled". According to criterion 2b, these passages require inline citations "no later than the end of the paragraph". I suggest that you add all the relevant references before a renomination.

A few other observations Phlsph7 (talk) 08:23, 11 May 2024 (UTC)
 * WP:EARWIG detects no copyright violations
 * This is a list of kingdoms and empires in Africa throughout history. This lead sentence more or less just repeats the title, see MOS:THISISALIST
 * For this reason, and in the interest of highlighting difference replace "difference" with "differences" or "the difference"
 * worldstatesmen.org is an unreliable source