Talk:Lynne Talley

Review
The article has been much improved by the edits of, particularly the Early life and Career sections. I've made a few changes (mostly reference formatting and some wording changes). I have a few suggestions to further improve it:


 * I think that Other Major Field Experience would work better incorporated into the Career section in prose form.
 * The same may be true of the Sabbatical section, since they may have been significant occurrences in her biography.
 * I'm still not sure about the seagoing experience section. It may be better compressed to a 2-5 sentences summarising the ships and period (e.g. Talley served onthe R/V Knorr during the 1990s as the chief scientist). Again, this could be integrated into the Careers section, or be a subsection of it.

Hopefully these suggestions are helpful, T.Shafee(Evo&#65120;Evo)talk 02:33, 19 May 2016 (UTC)