Talk:M. C. Escher/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: TonyTheTiger (talk · contribs) 18:03, 15 December 2011 (UTC)

I am quickfailing this. Please review WP:WIAGA. Note that the WP:LEAD should summarize the entire article. I suggest including at least a one sentence summary of each subsequent section. Most paragraphs that I looked at had no inline citations. Please refer to WP:CITE regarding sourcing.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 18:03, 15 December 2011 (UTC)


 * I agree that the lead is a bit short. However, per WP:WIAGA inline citations are needed for direct quotations, statistics, published opinion, counter-intuitive or controversial statements that are challenged or likely to be challenged. I don't see any such points in the article that have not been addressed with inline citations. De728631 (talk) 01:04, 16 December 2011 (UTC)