Talk:Maharishi Vedic Approach to Health

MC’s revert
I would like to note here my objection to MC’s reversion of reliably sourced content added to the article on Sept 15. I have other things pressing at the moment, but give will a fuller explanation here as soon possible. EMP (talk 19:20, 16 September 2013 (UTC)
 * Appropriate sourcing is necessary, but not sufficient, for inclusion. Material must also be presented neutrally and without without undue weight. Per WP:MEDRS, it is especially important to avoid juxtaposing lower-quality sources to editorially "debunk" the conclusions of higher-quality sources. MastCell Talk 19:39, 16 September 2013 (UTC)
 * I fully agree with that reasoning. Lower quality sources by their very nature have much less weight to try and be used to attack higher quality sources, IRWolfie- (talk) 22:45, 16 September 2013 (UTC)

@Mastcell: You have reverted criticism of quality assessment methods used in the 2007 AHRQ-funded review by Ospina et al, with three supporting references. You have said that these references are low quality and are being given undue weight. But this is not the case. The references cited, and others that I will add here, are of excellent quality, and in addition much more up-to-date: 1) The 2012 protocol for the new AHRQ-funded review of meditation and health takes issue with the 2007 AHRQ-Ospina review’s insistence on double-blinding in quality assessment: “Double-blinding, a major component of the report’s evaluation criteria, is not an appropriate control for placebo in meditation research . . . . Several reviewers have objected to the use of double-blinding in meditation research.”  2)  A 2012 systematic review and meta-analysis by Chen, published in the journal, Depression and Anxiety, explicitly criticizes the quality assessment criteria of the Ospina review. 3) Orme-Johnson, in the Journal of Alternative and Complementary Medicine, which is on the Brandon/Hill list that MEDRS recommends as core, also critiques Ospina’s approach to quality assessment. His commentary appeared alongside the journal-published version of Ospina’s review. The reliability of this source is also evidenced by Orme-Johnson’s comments being cited in the 2012 AHRQ protocol mentioned in 1) above. Here are two more: 4) The extensive 2013 American Heart Association review of meditation and health notes Ospina 2007 has been criticized on methodological grounds, citing two meta-analyses. 5) A 2010 systematic review and meta-analysis authored by Chiesa and Serretti, published in Psychiatry Research, points out Ospina’s outdated quality assessment, and acknowledges Orme-Johnson's contribution in identifying this as a problem.

Note also that the AHRQ has archived Ospina 2007 as no longer current.

The modest criticism of Ospina 2007 that was reverted Sept 15 is substantiated by several high-quality and up-to-date sources. It is clearly a significant viewpoint and deserves appropriate mention in this article, as per WP:MEDRS, WP:WEIGHT and WP:NPOV. EMP (talk 22:15, 19 September 2013 (UTC)
 * It's a misuse to quote the 2012 AHRQ protocol document as a criticism or refutation of the 2007 review. The protocol doesn't dismiss the 2007 document, but rather seeks to update and improve it. We'll replace the 2007 review as soon as the update is published. Incidentally, I think that you'll find the updated analysis to be, if anything, more negative about the evidence for health benefits from TM than was the 2007 Ospina analysis. But we'll see. Chen 2012 analyzed meditation approaches in general. Of the 40 trials included in their meta-analysis, only 3 dealt with TM. It's a real stretch to use that paper to say anything specific about TM. If you're citing it because one sentence in the middle of the 5,000-word paper supports your effort to dismiss the 2007 Ospina paper, then, well, I'm not sure what to tell you. (The paper is for anyone curious). Orme-Johnson is a TM advocate and an employee of Maharishi University. An opinion piece from a TM employee, published in a relatively obscure journal, cannot be presented as a refutation of a definitive AHRQ systematic review. A more fundamental violation of WP:WEIGHT and WP:MEDRS would be difficult to imagine. Let's say a large, high-quality meta-analysis by AHRQ finds that Merck's new antidepressant is ineffective. Then, an employee of Merck writes an opinion piece in a low-profile, non-mainstream journal disputing the AHRQ findings. Do we present the Merck employee's opinion as the last word on the subject, without even mentioning that he works for Merck? That's exactly what you're proposing. The bottom line is that there's a well-established hierarchy of reliable and credible clinical evidence. AHRQ reviews and Cochrane Library reviews are near the top of that hierarchy. If you're unhappy with the 2007 AHRQ findings, you're in luck; they're being updated as we speak. There is no deadline, and we'll get the updated findings into the article once they're finalized. Until then, please respect distinctions in source quality. MastCell Talk 23:31, 19 September 2013 (UTC)

I’d like to backtrack slightly, for the sake of any who may just be coming to this discussion. Here is how we got to where we are: On July 17, IRWolfie deleted content that critcized the approach to assessing experimental quality used in the 2007 AHRQ-Ospina review of meditation and health. He used the following edit summary: (he removed several items under this one edit summary). The content deleted: "TM researcher and former Maharishi University of Management professor David Orme-Johnson said that the review's use of double blinding, which is required by the Jadad scale, is not appropriate to meditation research and that the review failed to assess more relevant determinants of research quality. (Ref: 2008 commentary by Orme-Johnson published in the Brandon/Hill-listed Journal of Alternative and Complementary Medicine)." which had come after the sentences, "A 2007 review of meditative practices that included Transcendental Meditation concluded that the definitive health effects of meditation cannot be determined as the scientific evidence was of poor quality. The review found that meditation has no advantage over health education to improve blood pressure, body weight, heart rate, stress, anger, self-efficacy, cholesterol, dietary intake, or level of physical activity in hypertensive patients” (ref: 2007 AHRQ-funded systematic review by Ospina et al.)."

On Sept 16, I added to the article a much briefer statement of criticism of quality assessment methodology in Ospina 2007 (I simply followed the first sentence in the quotation immediately above [ending in "was of poor quality"] with “though the review has been criticized for using an inappropriate method for assessing quality”), and included references to two additional sources. This was reverted by MastCell, with the edit summary, On Sept 19, I explained on this page that the three sources I had cited, plus two more, are not only reliable, but of high quality. Let me further elaborate: In WP:MEDRS, systematic reviews, meta-analyses, and official position papers of major scientific bodies are considered ideal evidence. My five sources included two systematic reviews, the published 2012 research protocol for a new federally-funded review of meditation and health, and an extensive 2013 review by the American Heart Association, which cited two meta-analyses. Here are the five sources, this time also including their actual comment on Ospina 2007: 1) A 2012 systematic review and meta-analysis by Chen et al. . Note that my purpose here is not to cite Chen’s findings on TM and anxiety, but rather their criticism of Ospina’s methodology: "" 2) The 2013 Scientific Statement from the American Heart Association on Alternative Approaches to Lowering Blood Pressure : "(referring to Ospina et al 2007)," 3) A 2010 systematic review and meta-analysis by Chiesa and Serretti The authors discuss limitations of their own review in the light of Ospina 2007: "" 4) The published 2012 protocol for the new AHRQ-funded review of meditation and health. This protocol analyzes methodologies utilized in AHRQ-Ospina 2007 and other early reviews of meditation and health, and as such is an excellent source of authoritative commentary on this subject. My quotation of this source in this context is not a “misuse,” as alleged by Mastcell. Their comment: "" @Mastcell: note that the forthcoming AHRQ review isn't an “update” of Ospina 2007. It has a different scope—it does not look at several of the main Ospina outcomes, such as blood pressure. Also, its inclusion criteria are much narrower. 5) A 2008 commentary by Orme-Johnson, published in the Journal of Complementary and Alternative Medicine. This is not an “obscure” journal, as evidenced by the fact that Ospina et al. sought it out to publish their major 2008 article [PMID: 19123875], in which they summarise much of their 2007 review. Significantly, Orme-Johnson’s commentary appeared adjacent to this article in the same issue. Clearly the journal editors felt the comments of this author to be worthy of note, notwithstanding he is a former professor at Maharishi University. Also, his commentary is cited by the 2012 AHRQ protocol and the 2010 Chiesa systematic review. As noted above, JACM is on the MEDRS-recommended Brandon/Hill list of core medical publications. Therefore I am not making “pseudoscientific claims,” or using low quality sources to debunk higher-quality ones. Several MEDRS-compliant sources indicate that Ospina 2007 was flawed in its methods for assessing scientific quality. WP:NPOV says neutral editing means “representing fairly, proportionately, and, as far as possible, without bias, all of the significant views that have been published by reliable sources on a topic.” The common view of these five sources is significant and its complete exclusion is not justified by Wikipedia policy. EMP (talk) 20:34, 25 September 2013 (UTC)
 * The "Journal of Alternative and Complementary Medicine" is not a reliable source, whether its on some hallowed list or not. It makes statements that are clearly incompatible with more reliable sources such as . The reliability of each article would need to be established on a case by case basis (in this case it is unreliable since the material is by a TM advocate) IRWolfie- (talk) 10:48, 28 September 2013 (UTC)

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I am inquiring about the second paragraph of the lead section in this article. According to WP:LEAD and MOS:LEAD, the lead section should be written in "a clear, accessible style with a neutral point of view." I know the 1991 article and 2008 study are extensively discussed in the Wiki article; however, it feels like there is a lack of a NPOV in the lead section. Would shortening and making this paragraph more concise contribute to a more NPOV in the lead section? Whitestar12 (talk) 04:05, 15 March 2023 (UTC)