Talk:March 2023 North American winter storm

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Infobox weather event[edit]

This really should use Infobox weather event, and not the old one. 74.101.92.237 (talk) 19:31, 17 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I have changed the infobox, now {{Infobox weather event}} is being used. Tails Wx 01:31, 18 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Requested move 9 December 2023[edit]

NOT MOVED
Discussion was opened by a now blocked WP:SOCK (Andrew5). The Weather Event Writer (Talk Page) 04:21, 11 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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March 2023 North American winter storm → Mid-March 2023 North American winter storm – The Early-March 2023 North American storm complex also had a significant winter storm, so disambiguation is needed. Could also support March 9-15, 2023 North American winter storm. 74.101.92.237 (talk) 15:02, 9 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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GA Review[edit]

Passed. Riley1012 (talk) 19:45, 12 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Reviewer: Riley1012 (talk · contribs) 00:16, 7 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! I will take a look at this within one week. -Riley1012 (talk) 00:16, 7 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
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1. Well-written

  • Jon Palmer of the National Weather Service office in Gray, Maine stated that the precipitation may cause... Add a comma after Maine.
 Done! ~ Tails Wx (🐾, me!) 17:56, 12 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  • 25 "weather-related incidents", including several water rescues, occurred across the city of Fresno. Write out "Twenty-five" or rewrite so the sentence doesn't start with a numeral. (MOS:NUMERAL)
 Done, wrote out "Twenty-five"! ~ Tails Wx (🐾, me!) 17:56, 12 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  • 20–40 inches (51–102 cm) of snow fell in Southern Vermont, the Adirondacks, and the Monadnock Region of Southwestern New Hampshire. This sentence also shouldn't start with a numeral.
I did initially re-wrote the sentence to avoid starting it with a numeral, but ultimately the sentence was removed since I couldn't find a source for it. ~ Tails Wx (🐾, me!) 17:56, 12 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

2. Verifiable
Earwig's Copyvio check is good. Sources are reliable.

  • 20–40 inches (51–102 cm) of snow fell in Southern Vermont, the Adirondacks, and the Monadnock Region of Southwestern New Hampshire. What is the source for this?
 Removed, since I couldn't find a source for it! ~ Tails Wx (🐾, me!) 17:56, 12 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  • Spot check
  • More than 320,000 power outages occurred across the areas impacted by the winter storm, and caused three fatalities and two injuries. The source listed there were 240,000+ power outages, and it doesn't mention the fatalities.
    • Two of the fatalities were in the storm on the West Coast and one was in North Dakota. While it was the same system, it wasn’t the nor’easter that got the media coverage. 8.44.200.42 (talk) 13:39, 12 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Per above, and in addition to my edit summary here. The power outages fatalities, and injuries in the impacts section add up to 320,000 power outages, 3 fatalities, and 2 injuries. ~ Tails Wx (🐾, me!) 17:56, 12 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  • ...with Dennis recording the highest wind gust in the state, at 63 miles per hour (101 km/h). The source indicates Rockport, Massachusetts had the 63 mph wind gust, not Dennis.
 Fixed! ~ Tails Wx (🐾, me!) 17:56, 12 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  • No issue: 2, 6, 10, 12, 17, 19, 22, 25, 29, 33, 38, 39, 41, 45, 55, 57, 62

3. Broad
The article is broad and focused.

4. Neutral
The article is neutral.

5. Stable
This article is stable day-to-day.

6. Illustrated
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Well done Tails_Wx, just a couple of minor fixes needed. -Riley1012 (talk) 17:33, 11 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Riley1012, I have addressed your concerns above. Thanks! :) ~ Tails Wx (🐾, me!) 17:58, 12 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Looks good, I will approve this article! -Riley1012 (talk) 19:44, 12 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
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