Talk:Margaret Allen

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): KKluber. Peer reviewers: E.prusha, ToyStoryAndy.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 00:31, 18 January 2022 (UTC)

Reviewer Notes
E.prusha: Good article. It is well laid out, neutral, and all the information seemed to be cited correctly. I would say that the lead paragraph might need a few more sentences, but that is easily fixable. If you feel the need to add another section, you can specifically talk about the aspects of her transplant procedure. Overall, great start.

"She founded the University of Washington Medical Center's heart transplant, which was the first of its kind in the Pacific Northwest region, and was the program director until 1996." - The wording of this is kind of confusing, but I'm not sure what its supposed to say so I'm not going to try to change it. — Preceding unsigned comment added by E.prusha (talk • contribs) 23:53, 18 November 2017 (UTC)