Talk:Mark Keppel High School

Tone
Two uses of the word "harmonious" in two adjoining paragraphs. Flowery marketing prose, inappropriate for an encyclopedia entry. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 69.106.227.211 (talk) 23:53, 5 January 2009 (UTC)

2000s content
Much more information needs to be added about the 2000s. Once there is enough substantial information, there's much we can do to rearrange the information so that it looks like the form of the Stuy article's organization.

Notable Alumni
Some of these people aren't really even famous. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 128.54.249.157 (talk) 09:15, 14 May 2009 (UTC)

SFC DAVED LEATON U.S. ARMY RET bronz  star recipient  class of 87 Drill10 (talk) 01:53, 22 January 2017 (UTC)
 * He does not have a Wikiarticle, and does not seem to be notable. See WP:MILPEOPLE. Meters (talk) 01:59, 22 January 2017 (UTC)

Rewrite
Assiduously working on flowery language and la-de-da stuff. ;-) Resource:http://www.aacompcenter.org/cs/wested/view/sdp/19  — DocOfSoc • Talk  •  09:51, 8 April 2011 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit request on 31 October 2014
Additional Notable alumni:

Frederick J Ryan, Class of 1973. Former Chief of Staff for Ronald Regan and current Chairman of the Board of Trustees for the Ronald Regan Foundation.

He was also Vice President of the senior class of 1973. No internet link for that, but I have a copy of the 1973 yearbook and can send you a scan of relevant pages.

echeeseman2@gmail.com

63.230.21.6 (talk) 00:11, 31 October 2014 (UTC)
 * Yes please, a source (eg a scan of the page) for that would be great. Stickee (talk) 01:24, 31 October 2014 (UTC)

✅ I have called him Fred Ryan as our article, and assumed good faith as we don't accept scans - Arjayay (talk) 11:01, 5 November 2014 (UTC)

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