Talk:Mark Lanegan/GA1

GA Review
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Hi. This article isn't quite up to the GA criteria yet, so I'm going to call this an unsuccessful nomination and mark it accordingly. Some issues that need work... Anyways, I'm happy to take another look at this after you've done some more work on it. Good luck. —Giggy 10:46, 30 July 2008 (UTC)
 * The lead needs expansion, per WP:LEAD. In fact, it feels like there's potentially a lot more content that could be added to the entire article.
 * A lot of stuff needs citation... eg. the all the stuff in the Early life sectiona after ref 3, which quite clearly isn't common knowledge, needs citation)
 * Most of the musical career stuff just talks about the band's work and reads like a band article. This article is meant to be about Lanegan the person - what did he do in the context of those works? Flea (musician) and John Frusciante are good examples of what I mean.
 * Needs copyediting and checking for spelling/punctuation/grammar... eg. little things like.