Talk:Marlon Bundo's A Day in the Life of the Vice President/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 23:13, 12 November 2018 (UTC)

Comments That's it. Nothing fundamentally wrong here, so I'll put it on hold while these minor issues are discussed and resolved. The Rambling Man (talk) 13:29, 14 November 2018 (UTC)
 * Not sure why the "for the" hatnote has the book title in not italics, I understand the mechanics but wouldn't it be better to not use the italics markup in the hatnote so it does render as italics?
 * "father of Charlotte Pence and husband of Karen Pence" probably no need to repeat Pence both times here, especially as you mentioned them by name in the previous sentence.
 * "ultimately so did the publisher of the book, Regnery. " the book has changed subject here to the satired version, I take it this means the publisher of this book?
 * "on March 19, 2018 by " comma after year.
 * "Nixon and Reagan presidential libraries" any links possible for those of us who have no idea what these are?
 * " Washington D.C." comma missing after Washington.
 * "Publisher's Weekly" that should be in italics.
 * "favored the Twiss book" first mention of Twiss, this should be noted earlier so we know what "the Twiss book" is.
 * "real BOTUS...The book" ellipsis should have space on either side.
 * " vice president.[23][24][10]" numerical order for refs.
 * "Author Charlotte Pence" I don't think you need to reiterate her status as author again.
 * You link Twitter but not Instagram first time round. I'd link both or neither.
 * I believe I've addressed all the comments raised above. I appreciate your suggestions and comments. Best, Barkeep49 (talk) 16:09, 14 November 2018 (UTC)
 * TRM: A note that the hatnote change was undone by with the edit summary all italics in hatnote by default. Correct MOS formatting in this situation is something one or both of you are likely to know better than I and so I defer about the best way to handle this. Best, Barkeep49 (talk) 20:06, 14 November 2018 (UTC)
 * Okay, I'm happy with this now, the changes look good so I'm promoting to GA. Nice work. The Rambling Man (talk) 20:35, 14 November 2018 (UTC)