Talk:Marlowe portrait

Pinging people
, feel free to improve. This includes title, there may be a better one. Gråbergs Gråa Sång (talk) 13:34, 8 August 2019 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the ping. I'd never really considered the provenance of this portrait, so I learned something useful today. I've made some minor modifications, and added one possible source for future expansion, but I'm afraid this is a bit outside my area so I won't be much help here. Peter is probably your best bet in that regard. Incidentally, be on alert for authorship pushing related to this portrait: several of the sources I ran across that mentioned it were not reliable for that reason. --Xover (talk) 13:53, 5 October 2019 (UTC)
 * Thanks . Per the Erne article, perhaps this article should have more detailed scepticism, I think I saw a good fairly recent source on that somewhere. Erne seems to be mistaken on "oil on canvas" (p28) though, and we all know that Tobacco and Boys is written by Stephen Fry and not someone named Orgel as claimed on page 30. Some authorship-stuff could have a place here, if well-cited and identified as such. Gråbergs Gråa Sång (talk) 14:55, 5 October 2019 (UTC)
 * I agree. A couple relevant topics ottomh: the portrait's discovery as an event; its physical composition; art critics' perspective (the portrait as a piece of art); and its assessment by historians of various stripes over the years since its discovery. I think Erne is a good template for a description of its (lack of) provenance. --Xover (talk) 15:48, 5 October 2019 (UTC)

, thanks for all your work. I think I saw a source somewhere that argued that Aetatis Suae 21 could/should be read that the guy was 20 at the time, perhaps I can find it again. Gråbergs Gråa Sång (talk) 10:33, 24 May 2021 (UTC)


 * The guy who wrote the article in this publication mentions that issue. It is something that needs to be brought up - https://www.corpus.cam.ac.uk/sites/default/files/images/Development%20Office/The%20letter/Corpus_Letter_93_2014%20-%20Copy%201.pdf


 * Catsmeat (talk) 15:04, 24 May 2021 (UTC)

I'd also like to find a WP:RS so we can mention Tim Downie. Gråbergs Gråa Sång (talk) 11:10, 25 May 2021 (UTC)

, hello again. Afaict, your work has made this article DYK acceptable per 1b at Did_you_know, do you want to nominate it? Gråbergs Gråa Sång (talk) 15:28, 27 May 2021 (UTC)

Well, to late now. Gråbergs Gråa Sång (talk) 20:23, 30 May 2021 (UTC)


 * Oh dear, I forgot about the chance of a DYK. I guess I should check in more often.Catsmeat (talk) 13:54, 31 May 2021 (UTC)

According to Lukas Erne
" By means of the ingenious device of ruling out all the other contenders with the same or even better credentials, not only Marlowe but, arguably, Marlowe scholarship was given a face. It should not surprise us that it was the then Master of Corpus Christi College, Cambridge, who, in 1953, cleverly identified "the face that launched the Marlowe industry." 4"

This is a bit cryptic. Is he referring to the librarian in the WP-article or someone else? OTOH, he says the portrait is oil on canvass, and I'm fairly sure that's wrong. Gråbergs Gråa Sång (talk) 14:57, 29 May 2021 (UTC)

WP:CITEVAR
At some point, I may change the un-compliant refs into the form I started using for his article: without a separate "sources" section. I don't know if it has a name, but I find it easier to work with. Gråbergs Gråa Sång (talk) 19:02, 31 May 2021 (UTC)

Article title / first line
I can't spot any sources which actually call this "the Marlowe portrait". Most simply describe it (e.g. "the nameless portrait"); Rackham, who is sure it is not Marlowe, calls it "the Pseudo-Marlowe Portrait"; British Library has "Painting of a young man, perhaps Christopher Marlowe, 1585"; Susan Price says it is known as "The Apocryphal Marlowe".

I'd suggest the name we are using isn't supported by sources, and our current use of it as a title for the picture implies a greater conviction that the portrait in fact depicts Marlowe than our sources allow.

We may need to keep it as an article title for want of anything better, but I'd suggest even if so we shouldn't use it in the text without a source. Thoughts? TSP (talk) 12:42, 4 June 2021 (UTC)


 * There are sources that use "Marlowe portrait" (the two last adds "putative"), but if there's a better WP:COMMONNAME I'm open to it, the current title will be a redirect anyway. The current title is decent per WP:CRITERIA. I don't think we generally add scarequotes to article titles ;-). I see nothing wrong with writing "The Marlowe portrait, also referred to as [pick a couple of WP-good ones]..." in the lead.


 * As currently written, "Marlowe portrait" is only found in the lead, which is fairly common WP-standard as long as that is the title. Gråbergs Gråa Sång (talk) 13:16, 4 June 2021 (UTC)


 * , do you have an opinion? Gråbergs Gråa Sång (talk) 13:18, 4 June 2021 (UTC)
 * , per the "full title" of the work is Putative Marlowe portrait. It would be an unfortunate title to use though, since rather than "commonly believed to be", there appears to be scholarly consensus that it is almost certainly not Marlowe. Implausible Marlowe portrait, might be a more accurate title, but, as far as I can tell, nobody has called it that. I'm sorry I can't be more helpful. Vexations (talk) 20:59, 4 June 2021 (UTC)
 * Thanks for your thoughts! Gråbergs Gråa Sång (talk) 21:06, 4 June 2021 (UTC)
 * Painting of a young man, perhaps Christopher Marlowe, 1585 is a little long. Gråbergs Gråa Sång (talk) 21:52, 4 June 2021 (UTC)
 * Oh, and thanks for improving the age bit, I've been mulling that over. Gråbergs Gråa Sång (talk) 13:27, 4 June 2021 (UTC)


 * "The putative Marlowe portrait is an unsigned..." is an option. Gråbergs Gråa Sång (talk) 13:30, 4 June 2021 (UTC)


 * We may need to tweak "This motto has not been found in other texts." Perhaps we should contact Jolie and ask her to upload a free image of the phrase on Commons for use in the article. The encyclopedic value is unmeasurable. Gråbergs Gråa Sång (talk) 13:48, 4 June 2021 (UTC)


 * I do think there is a difference between a term used in 'scare quotes' and one used uncritically; that being so, only two of the five sources you provide use the term without distancing from it in some way.
 * Adding 'putative' would help a lot, I think.
 * (On the motto - Jolie could be covered by adding 'contemporary', but a few sources identify parallels with similar mottoes which could be mentioned, like Shakespeare's "Quod me alit, me extinguit" from Pericles.) TSP (talk) 15:44, 4 June 2021 (UTC)
 * Pericles was in the article, I removed it since the ref used didn't make a connection between play and the M... portrait. I'm also thinking of adding something on the lines of "It's been suggested that this would be the kind of motto Marlowe would have, if he'd had a motto." If think I've seen hints of that in the sources. Gråbergs Gråa Sång (talk) 15:52, 4 June 2021 (UTC)


 * The source that we use for saying that the motto isn't found elsewhere says, "The motto echoes a widespread sentiment of the time, although the actual words have not been identified anywhere else (see Noel Purdon, Letter 46 (1967)). It might be the sort of motto that Marlowe might have had if he had had a motto." Summing that up as "This motto has not been found in other texts" seems to be rather oversimplifying.
 * (One other minor note - the article has quite a lot of "it has been suggested", "some suggest" and the like at the moment - my understanding of Wikipedia style is that we should be specific wherever possible.) TSP (talk) 16:05, 4 June 2021 (UTC)
 * There is some of that, yes. It's not bad by default, at least "Some suggest Marlowe would not have afforded..." match the source. Gråbergs Gråa Sång (talk) 18:09, 4 June 2021 (UTC)
 * "Marlowe was born in February 1564 and was 21 in 1585, and Corpus Christi was Marlowe's college."
 * plus
 * "Marlowe's baptism date of February 1563 in the old style dates" seems to clash a little, I'll have to check what Nicholl says. Gråbergs Gråa Sång (talk) 18:09, 4 June 2021 (UTC)
 * I tweaked it a little. I note that our source Charles Nicholl modified his opinion. 1995: The evidence ... is strong. 2013: the evidence that it is him is tenuous. Gråbergs Gråa Sång (talk) 20:15, 4 June 2021 (UTC)
 * Here's a ref for Jolie, btw. Gråbergs Gråa Sång (talk) 20:57, 4 June 2021 (UTC)

Latin on painting
What is the WP-best way to write it in the article? As it appears on the painting, more "modern", what? Gråbergs Gråa Sång (talk) 12:36, 13 June 2021 (UTC)


 * Wikipedia's guidance on this is here: MOS:QUOTE.
 * I think the most relevant parts are: "In direct quotations, retain dialectal and archaic spellings"; but "Underlining, spacing within words, colors, ALL CAPS, small caps, etc. should generally be normalized to plain text. "
 * So I'd suggest we should keep the exact wording and spelling (including 'v' for 'u', contractions and so on), but convert from all caps to normal sentence case? TSP (talk) 11:01, 16 June 2021 (UTC)


 * Gratum. Mons Grieseo Canticum Griseo (talk) 13:35, 16 June 2021 (UTC)
 * I would like to advocate for u--in the spelling of this period, V was capital and u was lowercase (except only word-initially, but not strictly always), which would mean that "qvod" "nvtrit" etc. creates a spelling that is in my opinion especially untrue to the original; the original uppercase is taken and made into a specific version of lowercase that would be never produced out of this uppercase except modernly, and most importantly is unnatural both for the 16th century and for the 21st century, and for all the centuries in between. Of course, the lowercase "s" instead of period-correct "ſ" is also less true, as would appear in "destruit"... I feel just a modern conventional lowercase should be produced out of "QVOD ME NVTRIT...", since the original is produced under a slightly different conception of the Latin alphabet, where V and u were the same letter that had graphic variants, nearly (sometimes exactly) in the same way "A" and "a" are currently still the same letter with different appearances. Added: At least predominantly this was the case in the 16th century, I think. Possibly the modern distinction between the lowercase "v" and "u" had already appeared in some limited places, though this changes nothing for the inscription, since it still necessitates "quod" "nutrit" etc. Draco argenteus (talk) 03:00, 23 June 2021 (UTC)
 * If we're going to modernise it, modernise it entirely. I disagree with that part of the MoS when it comes to these old Latin inscriptions, particularly without a RS that backs the relevant changes, but if we're going to apply it then we should go all the way and not mix and match. Xover (talk) 05:35, 23 June 2021 (UTC)
 * Yep, that's what I am for. Modernize it entirely. As for sources, just put "quod me nutrit me destruit" in Google Books. Draco argenteus (talk) 06:43, 23 June 2021 (UTC)
 * @Draco argenteus And ætatis svæ? Gråbergs Gråa Sång (talk) 09:17, 23 June 2021 (UTC)
 * Overall the typical modern spelling produces "aetatis suae", but "ætatis suæ" is also used modernly. Usually the Latin on the English Wikipedia that I chance to see has "ae", but I occasionally see "æ"--I don't know if there is a policy. For the period, the typical spelling in Roman type would be "ætatis ſuæ", with the variation being that either one or both ashes can instead be "ę" (essentially at random, printer's whim). Draco argenteus (talk) 09:35, 23 June 2021 (UTC)
 * As it says in the Bible, "Printers have persecuted me without a cause." Gråbergs Gråa Sång (talk) 10:04, 23 June 2021 (UTC)

Need to put names to faces?
I've done a bit of a rewrite, mostly just rearranging and rephrasing existing content to improve general readability; but I did remove: Nicholl states that peoples need to put faces to names works in favor of identifying the portrait as Marlowe. I don't really understand what this means, and whether it has any encyclopedic significance? I can't currently read the source - can anyone clarify what is meant by this, and give opinions on whether it adds any value to the article? TSP (talk) 10:56, 16 June 2021 (UTC)


 * I added it.


 * Quote page 8: "The evidence in favour of the identification [of the portrait as Marlowe] is strong, and our need to put faces to names does the rest."


 * My reading of this is that Nicholl is saying that "we" want/need a face to put on this celebrity, and this need has increased the portrait's modern use and impact. I think it's a musing worth including. I noted above that he seems to have changed his view on the evidence. Gråbergs Gråa Sång (talk) 13:53, 16 June 2021 (UTC)


 * Mm, I don't really see the value of it. In context, it is saying "The evidence is strong, and there is a human need to identify someone in a picture rather than leave them unidentified".  It just seems to be his personal opinion on human nature; I don't think adds anything encyclopedic about the portrait, especially shorn from the other half of the sentence. TSP (talk) 15:15, 17 June 2021 (UTC)
 * No, it's the opposite: he's saying that people really want to have a visual image of what a famous person looked like, so they are strongly inclined to identify even a painting of dubious provenance as being of that famous person (cf. all the claimed likenesses of Shakespeare). In almost all such cases the debate isn't really about identifying the sitter for a painting (although there's certainly a similar effect in that direction: people always want the sitter to be someone famous and not some minor country noble or rich dude), but whether the painting can be shoehorned to fit with whatever famous person they're interested in.I agree that it's his personal opinion, but it is the opinion of a RS on a central issue for this article, so when summarising his position it should be included. We just shouldn't repeat the assertion in Wikipedia's voice.Also note that while Nicholl is certainly a respected scholar, he's not primarily an expert on the visual arts or its history (so far as I know), and his writing style is often geared towards appealing to a general audience, so some such claims may be just colour rather than scholarly opinion. Xover (talk) 05:32, 23 June 2021 (UTC)
 * @TSP Pinging you so you know there's discussion going on here and in the thread above. Gråbergs Gråa Sång (talk) 09:15, 23 June 2021 (UTC)


 * Re-added. Gråbergs Gråa Sång (talk) 16:58, 30 July 2021 (UTC)