Talk:Metalor Technologies

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Métaux Précieux SA Metalor Hangon

Firstly I would like to stress out that I am neither personally nor family-wise, nor in any other way connected with the company, neither financially nor in any other possible way.

I have been lately doing my best, mainly on E and F wiki, to give a much clearer and thourough knowledge of the watch industry, in particular the Swiss Watch Industry. Having spent all my managerial career within the industry, I feel that it is necessary that the relaating articles give more knowledge to the people interested in, as has been the case up to now.

I had planned to continue constructing the article with much more technical knowledge of what involves the making of precious metal watch cases, etc.,

I do not feel that this page can be constructed as an advertisement for a company that does business only with manufacturers, who have the knowledge and can decide to place their orders wherever they please (mind you there are not so many refining companies in the field world wide.

At your disposal for further talks.

In any case, my trying to contribute to wikipedia might be somewhat more worthy than a quick deletion. Appreciating your kind cooperation. claude (talk) 23:13, 31 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]

No problem please do feel free to carry on improving the article. A few notes:

You need to start the article with a brief intro stating what the company is/does. All our articles start this way.
You need to get as many independent references as you can, this will stop someone else nominating the article for deletion.
Is this the best name for the article? The website calls the company the Metalor Group. Would that not be a better name?

Theresa Knott | token threats 00:15, 1 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Changing the name of the article[edit]

Hello, Could you please change the name of this article to Metalor Technologies SA. Effectively, the official name about this company is incorrect.

Thank you in advance.

John.