Talk:Metastatic breast cancer

page overly technical.
this page is much to technical form most people to understand.their is no section on symptoms of metastatic breast cancer,and until yesterday there was no section on treatment.because i am a very new user i do not feel comfortable rewriting the article,but if their are any experienced editors with knowledge on this subject,please rewrite the article using less technical language.Immunize (talk) 21:16, 8 January 2010 (UTC)


 * I agree; I'm trying to copyedit it, and will move the more-accessible sections at the end of the article further up.--Miniapolis (talk) 02:36, 4 September 2011 (UTC)

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