Talk:Meteorological history of Hurricane Dorian

B-class Review
✅ B1: References and Citations ✅ B2: Coverage and accuracy ✅ B3: Structure ✅ B4: Grammar and style ✅ B5: Supporting materials ✅ B6: Accessibility
 * All sentences in the body are cited with reliable sources and have a similar format.
 * All sections in the article cover the storm's meteorological history and records in a complete manner.
 * The article has a lead as well as every section necessary to complete the coverage.
 * The Grammar and style of the article are of a semi-professional manner.
 * The article has more than enough images to satisfy a reader.
 * The article is understandable, although somewhat more technical than a storm article as it is focused specifically on the meteorological history.

The article has been promoted to B-class based on the above review. Noah Talk 01:07, 12 September 2019 (UTC)

Interactive Map
I will be doing an interactive map for the article.. placing a preliminary map here. Noah Talk 03:49, 29 April 2020 (UTC)

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GAN Prep

 * Lead: KN - ✅
 * Origins and track through the Lesser Antilles: Noah - ✅
 * Rapid intensification and peak intensity: KN - ✅
 * Stalling over the Bahamas KN - ✅ (merged into previous section)
 * Northward turn, extratropical transition, and dissipation Noah -
 * Records Noah - ✅

I added a list here to keep track of the section TCRing and rewrites. Noah Talk 23:43, 1 May 2020 (UTC)
 * TCR added in for the first section. I have to work again so I will do more later. Noah Talk 02:07, 2 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Progress update: merged stalling into RI/peak. Also something of note, NHC didn't mention a Marsh Harbour landfall in the TCR. ~ KN2731 {talk · contribs} 10:26, 2 May 2020 (UTC)
 * I don't think anything needs done with records as I believe we included all the important ones. I will finish the rest of my last section tonight and then nominate the article for GA. Noah Talk 21:58, 2 May 2020 (UTC)

A-class review
For this article's inevitable FAC:


 * Could the lede be three evenly spaced paragraphs?
 * Had to make it 2 per MOS; the size is about the same as slightly smaller articles so I dont see an issue here. Noah Talk 19:53, 10 May 2020 (UTC)


 * "Dorian made landfalls in Barbados and St. Lucia" - should it be "in" or "on"? I thought if it's a small island, it's "on". The TCR says "over" here, but this TCR uses "landfall on". It's a nitpick, so I don't know if there's any official right/wrong
 * Changed some to "at" and others to "on". Noah Talk 19:53, 10 May 2020 (UTC)


 * "passed by Puerto Rico to the east on August 28" --> "passed east of Puerto Rico on..."
 * fixed. Noah Talk 19:53, 10 May 2020 (UTC)


 * "and was absorbed by a larger extratropical cyclone on September 9. " - infobox says dissipation was on 9/10, please fix
 * done. Noah Talk 19:53, 10 May 2020 (UTC)


 * Could you split "Origins and track through the Lesser Antilles" section into three paragraphs? The first one is long. I suggest splitting where the storm formed
 * Done. Noah Talk 19:53, 10 May 2020 (UTC)


 * "The National Hurricane Center (NHC) initially predicted slow development on August 23 as the system continued westward,[3] however, it organized into a tropical depression at 06:00 UTC on August 24, while approximately 805 mi (1,295 km) east-southeast of Barbados." - the antecedent for "it" here is NHC, but surely the NHC didn't organize into a TD :P
 * oops. Noah Talk 19:53, 10 May 2020 (UTC)


 * "While Dorian was located in an environment of warm sea surface temperatures, it initially intensified before the trend all but ceased over the next few days as a result of wind shear as well as abundant mid-level dry air." - could you simplify?
 * Split into two sentences. Noah Talk 19:53, 10 May 2020 (UTC)


 * Bit of a nitpick, but could you make sure refs are in order, so, for instance, ref 1 appears before ref 8?
 * Should be done. Noah Talk 20:48, 10 May 2020 (UTC)


 * "Soon after, Dorian's center re-developed farther north and convection fluctuated as the storm continued to be battered by dry air and interacted with the Leeward and Windward islands.' - I suggest splitting into two sentences, this is a lot for one
 * Done. Noah Talk 20:48, 10 May 2020 (UTC)


 * "Although Dorian was initially forecast to make landfall in Hispaniola and subsequently weaken or dissipate over the island, the system's track shifted east of Puerto Rico by August 28 as a result of directional change as well as the aforementioned center reformation." - I'm not a fan of the "aforementioned". I thought articles aren't supposed to be self-referential.
 * Removed. Noah Talk 20:48, 10 May 2020 (UTC)


 * I just noticed, you didn't really specify what was the basis for Dorian being upgraded to a hurricane.
 * NHC doesnt really mention why... this occurred at an intermediate and the TCR doesnt mention. The storm was already stronger by the next discussion and no hurricane winds were observed until close to the second landfall. <span style="white-space:nowrap;text-shadow:#009200 0.3em 0.4em 1.0em,#009200 -0.2em -0.2em 1.0em;color:#009200">Noah Talk 20:48, 10 May 2020 (UTC)


 * "This caused Dorian to track west-northwest into a highly favorable environment characterized by low wind shear, high relative humidity,[1] and sea surface temperatures of 29 °C (84 °F), then west straight towards the northwestern Bahamas." - the last part (then west straight) seems unrelated to the highly favorable environment
 * This sentence is more about that event causing the storm to track this way and then another. The first one just happened to be into a favorable environment so that was mentioned. <span style="white-space:nowrap;text-shadow:#009200 0.3em 0.4em 1.0em,#009200 -0.2em -0.2em 1.0em;color:#009200">Noah Talk 20:48, 10 May 2020 (UTC)


 * "Northward turn, extratropical transition, and dissipation" - could this also be split in three paragraphs?
 * Is it worth mentioning the NHC's predictions of a Florida C5 landfall?
 * Probably best saved for the US article since this wasn't nearly as important as the other one. <span style="white-space:nowrap;text-shadow:#009200 0.3em 0.4em 1.0em,#009200 -0.2em -0.2em 1.0em;color:#009200">Noah Talk 20:48, 10 May 2020 (UTC)


 * Could you mention where Dorian reached its secondary peak?
 * done. <span style="white-space:nowrap;text-shadow:#009200 0.3em 0.4em 1.0em,#009200 -0.2em -0.2em 1.0em;color:#009200">Noah Talk 20:48, 10 May 2020 (UTC)


 * Could you go into detail on the difference between Dorian becoming a post-tropical cyclone and it becoming fully extratropical? Something with fronts, probably
 * I think anything on this would hinge on being OR as a post tropical cyclone can be an extratropical cyclone. The NHC does not mention much in terms of differences between the two. <span style="white-space:nowrap;text-shadow:#009200 0.3em 0.4em 1.0em,#009200 -0.2em -0.2em 1.0em;color:#009200">Noah Talk 20:48, 10 May 2020 (UTC)


 * "Dorian was ultimately absorbed by a larger extratropical cyclone at 06:00 UTC on September 9." - could you add roughly where this happened?
 * Did as much as I could <span style="white-space:nowrap;text-shadow:#009200 0.3em 0.4em 1.0em,#009200 -0.2em -0.2em 1.0em;color:#009200">Noah Talk 20:52, 10 May 2020 (UTC)


 * "as well as the strongest in the Bahamas" - the ref just says "northwestern Bahamas", but given Dorian's intensity, I bet it was the strongest in the country. Could you get a ref backing that up? It seems like the subsequent sentence kinda says the same thing
 * I just removed that part. <span style="white-space:nowrap;text-shadow:#009200 0.3em 0.4em 1.0em,#009200 -0.2em -0.2em 1.0em;color:#009200">Noah Talk 20:52, 10 May 2020 (UTC)

All in all the article is in pretty good shape. ♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 15:38, 10 May 2020 (UTC)
 * That should be it. <span style="white-space:nowrap;text-shadow:#009200 0.3em 0.4em 1.0em,#009200 -0.2em -0.2em 1.0em;color:#009200">Noah Talk 20:52, 10 May 2020 (UTC)