Talk:Michelle Gass

Edit Request
I work for Levi's and would like to make some changes to Michelle's Wikipedia article. Can somebody review and make sure they are alright and follow the editing guidelines? I'll list the changes below.

1. Michelle is now the CEO. The title field in the infobox should be changed to: CEO of Levi Strauss & Co.. ✅ STEM info  (talk) 17:41, 5 April 2024 (UTC) 2. The first sentence can be changed to show the current status. And please also add that Michelle came from being the CEO of Kohl's.  The requested new text is: Michelle D. Gass (Petkers) is an American businesswoman who serves as the CEO of Levi Strauss & Co. She previously served as CEO of department store Kohl's. followed by the Moneyinc source. ✅ STEM info  (talk) 17:41, 5 April 2024 (UTC) 3. I'd like to rewrite the career info to be a bit more encyclopedic, chronologically ordered, and less repetitive. Starting with the second paragraph of the Education and career section (you'll have to view source to see the references, due to a bug in the TextDiff template.): ✅ STEM info  (talk) 18:03, 8 April 2024 (UTC) 4. The third paragraph could be rewritten as follows:The NRF award is more significant than the Kohl's Greatness mention, and the Fortune recognition is notable. The other thing that's not self-explanatory with item #4 is why I'm requesting the removal of the item about being an overpaid CEO. There are 100 CEOs on the list, which comes out every year, but there's no indication that being on the list is noteworthy. There's no media coverage of anyone making the list, or of the publishing organization, As You Sow. As You Sow has a Wikipedia article but it's poorly sourced, with no independent in-depth coverage. It seems including this info meets the conditions of WP:UNDUE, and is out of place in a bio. ✅ STEM info  (talk) 18:22, 8 April 2024 (UTC) 5. Please add this next, which has a proper source and replaces the existing Pepsi board info: In 2019, Gass was elected to the board of directors of PepsiCo. ✅ STEM info  (talk) 18:26, 8 April 2024 (UTC) 6. At the end of the November 2022 section, I'd like to revise the info to make it moire concise, and to remove unnecessary erxtra references per WP:OVERCITE. Then please add the line on the right with a source in their place. ✅ STEM info  (talk) 18:29, 8 April 2024 (UTC)

7. Please replace the last sentence of the Personal life section with: They have two children. The source is a dead link, but even so, it's not necessary to include unsourced children's names in bios, for privacy reasons. ✅ STEM info  (talk) 18:33, 8 April 2024 (UTC) Thanks in advance for reviewing my request. ~

Amandadekker85 (talk) 21:02, 1 April 2024 (UTC)