Talk:Mongolia and the World Bank

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Change "Due to this" to "Because of this"; Change "recently" to a date, use something like "As of....."; It would be extremely helpful if you can add some wikipedia article link to some terms you used in your article; Other than these comments, great job! Grantchen16 (talk)

Forgot to add a category section, use == Category == and add to it by using Iacevesd (talk)

ChiluuginT (talk) 03:00, 7 June 2017 (UTC)ChiluuginT
 * 1) Is each fact referenced with an appropriate, reliable reference? Not sure if all the references are reliable since I can not access the "web.a.ebscohost.com" reference, the website says "A System Problem has Occurred."
 * 2) Is everything in the article relevant to the article topic? Based on the four references that I can access the articles are relevant
 * 3) Is the article neutral with neutral sources? The article do have neutral sources
 * 4) Are there any claims, or frames, that appear heavily biased toward a particular position? Seems to be more biased towards the support of the projects.
 * 5) Do the citation links work? Two of the citation links by "web.a.ebscohost.com" do not work
 * 6) Is there plagiarism in the article? No
 * 7) Is any information out of date? No
 * 8) Is anything missing that could be added? Any negative side of the projects if there is any, maybe corruption or misuse of the fund.

Proposition to delete Historical Overview section
The article's Historical Overview section have no place here. The whole section talks about communism/democracy in Mongolia is an irrelevant piece of information. The only thing that is relevant is the last sentence: Mongolia also became a member of the World Bank in 1992, recently celebrating its 25th anniversary as a member of the organization (with a proper ref attached). I'm pinging, and  to thoroughly discuss how to clean up this mess.--Biografer (talk) 01:45, 27 December 2017 (UTC)

Agreed, that entire section should probably be deleted. Rosguill (talk) 21:28, 3 January 2018 (UTC)