Talk:Mountain Meadows Massacre and Mormon public relations

Poorly constructed sentence
Please clarify 'who what where when etc' in the following sentence:
 * Leonard is one of the co-authors of the book the LDS Church is writing about the massacre.

Right now the sentence fails to answer
 * 1) Is the book about the massacre?
 * 2) Is the LDS church writing about the massacre?
 * 3) Is the LDS church writing a book about Leonard?

--Ancheta Wis (talk) 15:34, 10 September 2008 (UTC)