Talk:Muhammad II of Granada

Copy edit
Hi. I have started the copy edit you requested. If you have any queries or qualms, don't hesitate to post them here.

Queries

 * Muhammad's name should be consistent through the article. Normally I would go with Muhammad after first mention. Or would you prefer me to use Muhammad II throughout? Gog the Mild (talk) 13:41, 6 March 2019 (UTC)
 * Good point. I agree with you, it should be Muhammad after the first mention, unless there's a nearby mention of someone else with the same name. Probably should be the same for Alfonso X and James II. I've updated the article. HaEr48 (talk) 18:12, 7 March 2019 (UTC)
 * That's good of you. Saves me the job. I'll crack on with the copy editing then. Gog the Mild (talk) 18:14, 7 March 2019 (UTC)
 * Another query. Should Grenada be referred to as a kingdom or an emirate? I assume the latter, and Muhammad as an emir? Gog the Mild (talk) 12:39, 8 March 2019 (UTC)
 * I am assuming that this is written in British English? Correct me if I am mistaken. Gog the Mild (talk) 12:42, 8 March 2019 (UTC)
 * For emir vs king, both titles (as well as another title, sultan) are used in sources (and apparently historical documents too), so they can be used interchangably in this context. As for the English variety, I'll just defer to your preference. Now that you mention it probably my writing isn't very consistent, sorry about that! HaEr48 (talk) 22:05, 8 March 2019 (UTC)
 * No problem - that's what copy editors are for. I get picked up on with my articles, and I should know better. Gog the Mild (talk) 22:21, 8 March 2019 (UTC)
 * And my work here is done. Good luck with the article. Gog the Mild (talk) 22:28, 8 March 2019 (UTC)
 * Thank you so much, ! By the way, what script did you use to fix everything to use British English? HaEr48 (talk) 03:10, 9 March 2019 (UTC)
 * User:Ohconfucius/EngvarB Gog the Mild (talk) 12:25, 9 March 2019 (UTC)

TFA prep
Hi and other interested editors. This is to let you know that as a part of preparing this article for TFA on 21 January I will be lightly running an eye over it for MoS-compliance and grammar, and possibly tweaking a little of the language to ensure that it is at it's very best for its appearance on the main page. If you have any queries about any of the edits don't hesitate to let me know. Thanks. Gog the Mild (talk) 17:41, 2 January 2020 (UTC)
 * Still a cracking article. I hope that you are ok with my minor tweaks. Revert any you don't like, obviously. Gog the Mild (talk) 18:45, 6 January 2020 (UTC)
 * Thank you very much. I looked at the diff and all the tweaks look very good. HaEr48 (talk) 14:03, 7 January 2020 (UTC)